The Green Eyed Dragon

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Original text:

The green eyed dragon was lonly and wished to maike a friend. How can I make a friend when everyone runs away from from me, she thought. She heard a huge splash and looked up from her den. Help! She heard. Help me! The green eyed dragon lumbered from her lair and venture out to the lake to see a little girl in the lake, splashing wildly.

The edit:

The green eyed dragon was lonlylonely and wished to maike a friendhad no one to play with. How can I make a friend when everyone runs away from from me, she thought. She heard a huge splash and looked up from her den. Help! She heard. Help me! The green eyed dragon lumbered fromout of her lair and venture out to the lake to see a little girl in the lake, splashing wildly in the middle of the lake.

The end result:

The green eyed dragon was lonely and had no one to play with. How can I make a friend when everyone runs away from me, she thought. She heard a huge splash, and looked up. "Help!" She heard a tiny voice calling out. "Help me!" The dragon lumbered out of her lair to see a little girl, splashing wildly in the middle of the lake.

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